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Blood red lips conceal the fangs,
for love or lust, the hunger pangs,
one soft incision, one moment of bliss,
grow limp to the lure of the vampire kiss

Stalk the night in search of prey,
Live in shadow, Sleep by day,
Clothe the world in drapes of dark,
Dead lips scream - enduring; hark!

For love is lost where life is too,
Together apart, romance askew,
A cold embrace, a withered heart,
A resentful love, one cannot impart

Trapped in a corpse, roaming the Earth,
Devoid of humanity, Robbed of all mirth,
To be immortal means to never be free,
Of the torment of life, never rested will be.
A fairly short vampire poem I wrote for an ex-gf, first poem I've written in years and it definitely won't be the last xx
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smartguy776 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014
Love this!
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iamacooldude17534 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
im a vamp and I blushed reading this poem :D it describes so much...
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RockerRainMarie Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
This is really good :)
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RadRav3n Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
there is no word to say how awesome this poem is.
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01HatsuneMikuo Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2012
Very, very amazing. <3
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Katniko Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
wow, your poems are spellbinding^^ :heart: they say a picture is worth a hundred words well you just mastered a few simple ryhms into a picture its amazing^^
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Redropp Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
very beautiful.
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hippyJess Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
great poem!
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FlawlessNobody Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's very beautiful. Good poem. I'm very enchanted by vamps, (Though I'm not a fan of Twilight) and your ex-gf should be proud. I didn't really know that guys were into poetry.
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darkest912 Featured By Owner May 14, 2011
wow this is like in my top 10 fav poems.
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