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Blood red lips conceal the fangs,
for love or lust, the hunger pangs,
one soft incision, one moment of bliss,
grow limp to the lure of the vampire kiss

Stalk the night in search of prey,
Live in shadow, Sleep by day,
Clothe the world in drapes of dark,
Dead lips scream - enduring; hark!

For love is lost where life is too,
Together apart, romance askew,
A cold embrace, a withered heart,
A resentful love, one cannot impart

Trapped in a corpse, roaming the Earth,
Devoid of humanity, Robbed of all mirth,
To be immortal means to never be free,
Of the torment of life, never rested will be.
©2004-2009 ~DaniB
:icondanib:

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A fairly short vampire poem I wrote for an ex-gf, first poem I've written in years and it definitely won't be the last xx

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:iconbulimicdemon:
*shivers* Ooh, you did a wonderful job with this one :D Keep it up, it is great!
:iconeviltwinskippy:
this is really, REALLY good. Love the rhyme scheme!!

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Be unique
Don't apoligize
Don't regret~**~
:iconariasis:
Omg I was lifted from the ground to float across the poem verse by verse the way the poem flowed enchants me a true beauty to behold mine eyes are grateful for seeing such a great poetic work.

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:iconllywenlla:
wow.

nuff said.

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There are a million in the Church tonight.
:iconwhyamibothering:
that was so brilliant. well done you
:iconoli-86:
Awesome poem, vivid images :) :+fav:

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Ordinary Morality is for Ordinary People!
:iconepgriesmer:
W O W...... i wish i could write poems like that...

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The bunnies are coming...AHH!!!! THEIR HERE!!!! RUN AWAY!!! THEY'VE GOT ME!! NOOOOOOO!!SERDYGFHKMOLM,POBYVUBHFDGB *has been dragged away by the evil bunnies*
:iconflesh-cladmonster:
Fantastic. This is perfect! I love it!

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Compliments of the flesh-cladmonster...
I'm a human being
Just like you
I dye my hair
I paint my nails
I cover up my body
All because its frail
I'm a human being
Just like you
I am weak
I sometimes fail
But because I am different
I will avail
:iconmooshiii:
Simply Amazing!
I absolutely love it :]
:iconscarletalchemist:
That was wonderful and beautiful nice job!:heart:

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